Selection of articles and slide decks for presentations Craig DiLouie has done on writing craft:
The Best Advice I Ever Got as a Writer (Wordbridge 2023 Keynote Presentation)
47 Tips for Effective Dialogue, Part 1
47 Tips for Effective Dialogue, Part 2
When Words Collide Presentation on Character Arcs
Theme, Symbolism, and Figurative Language, Part 1
Theme, Symbolism, and Figurative Language, Part 2
Theme, Symbolism, and Figurative Language, Part 3
Great books on writing and writers: ANATOMY OF STORY by John Truby, STORY ENGINEERING by Larry Brooks, TAKE OFF YOUR PANTS! by Libbie Hawker, THE WRITING LIFE by Jeff Strand.



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The first bit of advice is obvious, which is to avoid mixing metaphors and similes in proximity in the text. And to avoid mixing incongruous metaphors, and mixing similes together. You can write, “This truck is a rock, it forges ahead no matter what,” and the reader will understand the meaning of the sum, but it just doesn’t sound right because the individual ideas don’t mesh in a congruent way. In dialogue, of course, you can do anything if it serves the character, but in narrative, not so much. Personally, I subscribe to the theory that the best writing goes unnoticed so that the reader becomes more immersed in the story. If you’re going to call attention to your writing, however, you always want the reader to go, “Nice,” rather than, “Oh, that’s right, I’m reading a book.” For me, that’s my primary guide.

