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Excerpt From CRASH DIVE

April 20, 2015 by Craig DiLouie Leave a Comment

CHAPTER TWELVE
THE DESTROYERS

The battle stations alarm bonged throughout the boat.

“Battle stations, torpedo,” the quartermaster announced over the loudspeakers.

Around the S-55, all hands scrambled to man their stations for the attack.

In the control room, Reynolds would act as assistant approach officer and Rusty as assistant diving officer. Charlie remained on station as plotting officer.

The submarine started an attack approach, cruising toward the enemy ships at a new submerged depth of seventy feet. Going in slow and deep while raising the periscope as little as possible because it could be spotted and derail their surprise attack.

“All compartments report battle stations manned,” the telephone talker reported.

Charlie felt his first pangs of fear. He’d served on a destroyer. He knew how good they were at fighting submarines. In fact, the destroyer was the submarine’s natural enemy. Fast and nimble. Bristling with sonar, big guns, and depth charges.

The S-55 taking on these powerful ships was David and Goliath all over again. Though, in this case, David carried a pretty big stone.

The soundman called out a new bearing. Charlie forgot his fear as he marked it on the plotting paper. He had a job to do. Lives depended on him right now, just as they depended on every other man on the boat.

Five minutes passed. Five more. Wait and hurry up. In the dim red light of the control room, the dots and lines on the paper showed the Japanese ships and the S-55 slowly converging.

“They’re zigging,” the soundman reported.

To avoid a surprise submarine attack, destroyers often zigzagged, but they commonly did so based on a pattern. Charlie marked the new bearing and used his ruler to draw a straight line between the last two dots. After a few plots, the pattern would emerge. Then Frankie could get into a final position to take a shot at them.

“Steady as she goes,” Kane said. The cat and mouse game was on in earnest now.

The captain studied the plot Charlie was building mark by mark. The approach was an exercise in geometry. Kane had to maneuver his moving object to be at the precise place to shoot at objects that were themselves moving.

Right now, Frankie’s luck was holding. The Japanese ships were coming on as neatly as if she’d laid a trap. After turning the boat to starboard on a new northerly course of 10º True, Captain Kane’s subsequent orders to the helmsman continually nudged her into a firing position.

Rusty had been right; the man’s hands didn’t shake in combat. A cool customer.

The young officer tracking a target while Kane, hands on his hips, stood over him; it was like doing a classroom problem at Submarine School. Fear of failure, not of dying.

The captain tapped the paper with his finger. There. That’s where we’ll take a shot at the bastards. Charlie envisioned the attack. The enemy ships would present their broadsides as they passed at between a thousand and fifteen hundred yards. Frankie would be on course to lead her target by twenty-nine degrees—speed plus three—for a straight bow shot at them. Beautiful.

The captain brought the boat to forty-five feet. “Up scope.”

He whistled again as he scanned the darkness. “I can see them clearly now in the moonlight. Three Fubuki-class destroyers. And what looks like a heavy cruiser. I think it’s the Furutaka. A Furutaka-class cruiser, just like the Kako, which the 44 sank around these parts back in August.”

The men in the control room glanced at each other and grinned.

The captain said, “Nine thousand tons. That’s the ship we’re going to sink.”

He spoke with a light tone that betrayed nothing of the mounting pressure he must have felt. In fact, he sounded positively delighted at the prospect of taking a shot at the giant.

Then he brought the boat down to seventy feet, staying hidden.

“Rig for depth charge,” he said.

Around the boat, men prepared the boat to take a beating. All unnecessary lights were extinguished and emergency lighting turned on. Watertight doors were sealed.

Rigging for depth charge before an attack was atypical. With three destroyers up top, the captain was expecting swift and severe retaliation after Frankie sent the Furutaka to the bottom.

“All compartments report rigged for depth charge,” the telephone talker said.

“Very well.”

Rusty murmured to Charlie, “Having fun?”

Charlie wasn’t sure how a professional should answer that one. He decided to be honest. “Hell, yeah.”

“This part always is.”

“Helm, steer 005º True,” the captain said, nudging their course. He brought the boat back up for forty-five feet again. “Up scope. We’re getting close.”

The excitement in the room was almost palpable now.

Charlie spared a moment of reflection for their strangely methodical and deadly work. The men turned wheels, pushed buttons, pulled levers, studied instrumentation. At the end of this highly technical process, a hole would be blown in a big ship, and she would sink into the sound.

Possibly hundreds of men would be killed.

He wondered about those men out there. The Japanese were an alien race to him, but they weren’t evil or inhuman. They loved their children. They toiled on the same types of ships. They laughed. They dreamed. They suffered, and they died, just like any man.

In the end, none of it mattered. The Japanese slaughtered thousands at Pearl. More than a thousand at Cavite. While the individual Japanese wasn’t so different from Charlie, he served a brutal regime that was enslaving millions and threatening America.

Rusty was fighting for his wife and son. Charlie fought for Evie, but more than Evie, he was fighting for his country. The people in it and, just as important, the very idea of it.

The captain read the periscope’s stadimeter. “Range, fifteen hundred yards. It’s showtime. Torpedo room, make ready the tubes. Order of tubes is one, two, three, four. Set depth at four feet.”

In the torpedo compartment, the sailors loaded the torpedoes. The tubes flooded. The outer doors opened.

“All four tubes ready, Captain,” Reynolds confirmed.

“Torpedo room, stand by.”

The seconds ticked by. Charlie gaped at the captain, pencil clenched in his hand. Kane stared into the scope for another minute while water splashed on his bare shoulders.

“She’s coming on. Easy does it. Fire one!”

“Firing one,” Reynolds said and punched the firing button. Frankie shuddered as the torpedo ejected from its tube, a ton of metal and explosives suddenly exiting the boat.

Reynolds counted eight seconds on his stopwatch and pressed the plunger for the second tube. “Firing two!”

Another eight seconds: “Firing three!”

Then: “Firing four! Secure all tubes.”

Four torpedoes in a longitudinal spread. Kane wasn’t taking any chances. If all went according to plan, the first torpedo would hit the cruiser close to the bow. The ship’s momentum would carry it forward, allowing the other fish to nail her both amidships and near the stern. As the cruiser was nearly six football fields in length, the odds looked good.

The torpedoes streamed in a single line toward the cruiser. At this range, nearly two minutes would pass before the contact-exploders struck the hull and detonated.

This was it …

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Excerpt From CRASH DIVE

April 17, 2015 by Craig DiLouie Leave a Comment

CHAPTER ELEVEN
PATROL STATION

Rigged for red. Ready to surface in all respects. The surfacing alarm sounding.

The S-55 gently broke the surface of Savo Sound, the ocean inlet the men of the beleaguered Pacific Fleet were calling Iron Bottom Sound after numerous sharp naval battles.

Ready for the first night watch of the day, Charlie held the ladder tightly as the hatch partly opened. A heavy blast of sour air roared past him.

After the air pressure equalized and the tempest subsided, he climbed up and looked around. It was a routine to which he’d already become accustomed, but he felt a special urgency about it now.

They were in the Slot, and they’d received a message to expect a Japanese naval force passing through the area later tonight. After days of seeing no enemy ships, it was exciting news.

He took his time and scanned the area thoroughly. Aided by the budding moon, his night-adapted eyes picked out Savo Island to the east, Guadalcanal to the south.

“All clear,” he called down. “Lookouts to the bridge.”

Steam drifted out of the open hatch. His men emerged and took their stations.

Charlie took a deep breath of the clean air and inhaled the vital scent of jungle wafting from the nearby islands. After a day in the people tank, it smelled sweeter than Evie’s perfume. The temperature was considerably cooler topside at seventy-five degrees.

The main induction opened to suck the cool night air into the boat for both the crew and the engines. The diesels fired up to charge the battery while the boat stood-to facing north by west. By the end of Charlie’s watch, the battery had fully charged, and both diesels were assigned to the propellers. The old sea wolf was ready to hunt.

Rusty entered the bridge. “Permission to relieve you and your squires, noble sir. As incentive for that permission, I can tell you a sumptuous meal awaits you in the wardroom.”

“In that case, permission granted,” Charlie said. “What’s the cook serving up for dinner?”

“Pot roast and cock, and he’s all out of pot roast.”

Charlie laughed. Ever since the S-55 entered the Solomons, the men had stopped their shirking and horsing around and went to work with silent efficiency. But not Rusty. Not even the tension of imminent combat could keep the able lieutenant from his wisecracks.

Kidding aside, despite the hardships of service, submariners ate better than anybody else in the Navy, at least while the fresh provisions lasted. Right now, pot roast sounded fantastic.

“All sectors clear,” he told Rusty. “A dozen lighted planes, far off and coming across the stern, were reported. Navy fighters landing at Henderson Field.”

“Hopefully, they bombed those tin cans headed our way.”

“We should be so lucky,” Charlie agreed, though he was itching for a fight.

As the new watch manned their stations, he descended the stairs to the cigarette deck and then the main deck. He tied a metal bucket to a manila rope, tossed it over the side, and pulled up cool seawater. Then he started a quick sponge bath.

For a war zone, the scene struck him as peaceful. The slim moon’s light glimmered on the water, which lapped gently against the boat’s hull. His romantic Evie would have loved it.

He heard a distant droning and perked up. Charlie hustled back to the bridge while the watch scanned the skies.

A burst of light flared in the distance and died out. Then another. Moments later, he heard the first boom. Red tracers streamed into the night.

“Ho-lee shit,” one of the watchmen said.

More bright flashes, an entire cluster of them, brightened the horizon. The air filled with thunder and the distant wail of an air raid siren. Searchlights swept the sky.

The Japanese were bombing the airfield on Guadalcanal.

“Lookouts, get below,” somebody shouted up the shaft. “Clear the bridge!”

Bodies poured down the hatch. Charlie dropped to the deck and hustled out of the way. One by one, the rest of the men came down after him, talking excitedly.

“Hatch secured!” Rusty called from above.

The captain said, “Dive!”

The diving alarm sounded. The main induction clanged shut.

“Pressure in the boat, green board,” Reynolds reported. The boat was sealed up tight.

The S-55 rapidly slid into the black waters and achieved a good trim at periscope depth. The engines cut out. The electric motors engaged the propellers.

“Planes, forty-five feet.”

“What’s going on?” Charlie asked Rusty.

The lieutenant shrugged. “The captain pulled the plug.”

“Silence!” Kane roared, quieting them all.

The men stared at the captain. The captain stared at the soundman.

“I’ve got a turn count of three twenty-five RPM,” Marsh said. “Now I’m hearing multiple sets of screws. Light screws. Speed estimated twenty-five knots.”

Charlie grinned. That sounded like destroyers!

Marsh added, “Estimated range, eight thousand yards.”

The captain put on his sou’wester hat and oilskins. “Up scope.”

He peered into the dark, whistling a pop tune while water splashed on his shoulders. “Give me a bearing, Marsh.”

“Targets, bearing 115º True.” Plus or minus a few degrees.

The submarine’s Great War-vintage hydrophones weren’t perfectly accurate, but one thing was certain: The Japanese war party was coming straight at them. They intended to round Savo Island. Charlie guessed their mission was to give Henderson a good shelling tonight.

The captain smiled as he looked into the scope. “I think I see them. Come to papa. Down scope. Harrison, start plotting. Marsh, keep those bearings coming.”

Charlie dumped graph paper, pencils, and a ruler onto the plotting table. He marked the contacts’ estimated position.

“Bearing still on 115º True.”

Based on the war party’s bearing and estimated speed, he marked its likely new position on the plotting paper. He checked the boat’s gyrocompass and started plotting the S-55’s own position with a pencil and ruler.

“Left full rudder,” the captain said. “All ahead full. Come left to 275º True.” After the heavy sub completed her ponderous turn and found her new course, he added, “All ahead one-third. Up scope.” After another look at the approaching ships: “Down scope.”

Deep in thought, Captain Kane stepped away from the falling periscope.

He had a choice. He could take a shot at the destroyers as they passed and then radio their presence to warn American forces at Guadalcanal they were coming. Or he could let them pass, sound the alarm, and try to hit them on their way back.

Both carried risks. The former approach put them directly in a hornet’s nest. The latter was safer, but the Japanese might take another route home, and Frankie would miss her chance to take a crack at them.

Knowing the captain, Charlie believed he’d take the latter, more cautious approach.

Kane rubbed his stubbled jaw. The men stared at him, awaiting his command.

“Battle stations,” he said. “Torpedo attack.”

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Filed Under: Crash Dive Series, Submarines & WW2

RUN SILENT, RUN DEEP (1958)

March 31, 2015 by Craig DiLouie Leave a Comment

While on my submarine kick during the writing of CRASH DIVE, coming in April, I stuck with nonfiction and episodes of THE SILENT SERVICE, which is based on nonfiction accounts of submarine adventures during WWII. I didn’t want to read the classics like DAS BOOT. Sometimes, when you write a certain type of novel, it’s good to read a lot in that genre, as it keeps you in the mood and can inspire some ideas. Other times, it’s a risk. You might end up reading that truly killer book that discourages you from writing your book, because you can’t get your head out of the story you just read and into your own. You find yourself trying too hard to either write or not write the classic, either of which spells trouble for a writer looking for his own story.

After seeing DAS BOOT, I knew the book might be like that, so I avoided it until after I was done writing. (I’m reading it now, and so far, so good.) Then I found out about another classic submarine tale, RUN SILENT, RUN DEEP by Edward Beach. It’s a good thing I didn’t, as there are some common elements between that story and CRASH DIVE. I’ll be reading the book soon, but enjoyed watching the 1958 film starring the great Clark Gable and, one of my favorite actors, Burt Lancaster.

The film is about two men who personally clash against each other and the Japanese during the Pacific War. One is Richardson (Gable), a senior submarine captain with a desk job at Pearl Harbor, who every day for a year broods over the loss of his boat to a Japanese destroyer that has a legendary ability to kill subs. Bledsoe (Lancaster) is an executive officer about to be promoted to command his own boat. Bad news for Bledsoe–Richardson has convinced the admiralty to give him Bledsoe’s command. His goal: Take it into the Bungo Straits and find the destroyer that destroyed his boat and career.

The film contains a lot of terrific elements: loyalty, courage, vendetta and honor, all against the backdrop of WWII. Richardson is obsessed, but as a commander with a crew’s lives in his hand, what price is he willing to pay to get what he wants? Bledsoe was shunted aside because of Richardson’s power play and openly resents it, but is he going to settle his own scores, or does he have the integrity to serve the rank if not the man who holds it?

After doing a ton of research into WWII submarines, I can tell you the film is as authentic as it gets in terms of what service was like on one of the fleet boats. It’s not surprising Beach, author of the book on which the film is based, actually served on submarines in the Pacific during the war against Japan.

Overall, I loved it, it was a great find. The story starts as an engaging personal conflict and ramps up the tension until it becomes a taut thriller that in my view could compete today with the best Hollywood thrillers.

The book has something of a different plot, and I look forward to reading it. The book is very hard to find, as it’s been out of print for years, but you can watch the film starting here:

Filed Under: Movies & TV, Submarines & WW2

BREAKTHROUGH (1979)

February 5, 2015 by Craig DiLouie Leave a Comment

Continuing my World War 2 movie kick, I watched BREAKTHROUGH (1979), starring Robert Mitchum and Richard Burton at his snarly best.

The story follows Sergeant Steiner (Burton) from the Eastern Front to the Western Front. He becomes embroiled, albeit at the very peiphery, in the plot to assassinate Adolf Hitler and end the war. The question is whether the Americans will believe it and delay their attack, and whether the plot will succeed. Robert Mitchum plays the colonel of a tank battalion who believes Steiner.

It’s a strange movie. Lots of action, an interesting premise, but it’s fragmented, and the pieces didn’t hold together very well for me. Steiner is so cranky, and his relationships with almost everybody in the film so thin and forced, it’s hard to see him as a very likable protagonist. The stakes in the story kept changing. I can see what the film was aiming for, but while it had a lot of great moments, in my opinion it failed to reach it. The highlight of the movie was Mitchum, particularly his interactions with his cranky CO and the smartass sergeant who acts as his driver and personal aide.

Can’t say I’d recommend it, but if you’re into old war movies, you’ll probably want to give it a watch.

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THE ENEMY BELOW (1957)

February 3, 2015 by Craig DiLouie Leave a Comment

In a fit of virtue, I started switching from my bookstore to the library to get most of my reading. I picked up WAR IN THE BOATS by William Ruhe, which describes in detail his experience onboard a variety of submarines in the Pacific during World War 2. I got totally hooked, so much so I’m working on a short military thriller that will read like Horatio Hornblower meets a Turner Classic submarine movie and with a Michael Crichtonesque attention to technical detail, making you, the reader, a part of the crew seeing what it was really like fighting a war beneath the sea.

During all this research, I found an old movie, THE ENEMY BELOW (1957), which describes the fight between an American destroyer and a German U-boat during the War of the Atlantic. Robert Mitchum plays the captain with a score to settle, while we also follow the story of the U-boat captain, who hates the Nazis and is tired of the war.

Both men are very good at what they do, resulting in a clever cat and mouse game that culminates in a classic finish. Unlike THE VICTORS, which I reviewed yesterday, THE ENEMY BELOW doesn’t present the noble aims of war and then contrast it with the grim reality of violence and human nature. Instead, it holds up the horror of war and then contrasts it with small acts of human kindness that provide genuine hope for humanity’s future.

The film stretches reality as to the foresight the captains showed, as real captains during the war had much less awareness and certainty, but it’s a fun movie if you like war movies, and takes you inside a destroyer and a submarine, natural enemies of the sea.

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THE VICTORS (1963)

February 2, 2015 by Craig DiLouie Leave a Comment

THE VICTORS (1963) is a war movie that takes its subject seriously but may be even more powerful as an anti-war film than the comedy DOCTOR STRANGELOVE, which came out the following year. It stars George Peppard, Eli Wallach and Melina Mercouri, and has an early film appearance by Peter Fonda.

The story, adapted from a collection of short stories titled THE HUMAN KIND by Alexander Baron, based on his war experiences (British, but changed to Americans in the film), follows several American soldiers as they fight their way across Europe in World War 2. Like the book, the film presents a series of short stories that tie together.

The film contrasts the grim reality of the war with seamlessly integrated American propaganda reels and speeches by President Roosevelt. The President is seen several times describing the war as a noble conflict, a war to end war, a war that will provide a lasting peace for our children.

Unlike other war movies of the time, THE VICTORS portrays the soldiers not as sacrificing heroes (though they could be seen that way), but as average guys doing their jobs while trying to stay alive. Most of the storytelling focuses on what happens during those long stretches of marching and occupation and carousing when the bullets aren’t flying. The soldiers are portrayed as entirely human and despite their flaws, very likable.

The anti-war element of the film is driven by the evident contrast between the war’s noble aims and its grim truths presented with an even hand and without sentiment. Despite the noble aims of the war, human nature is what it is. In one scene, White soldiers beat up a pair of Black soldiers. In other scenes, destitute and lonely women are sexually exploited by the occupiers. The soldiers are often unthinkingly cruel to other soldiers and the locals. They fight over women. These things are shown as a matter of fact and without moralizing, but the point is clear. The war got rid of Hitler (thank God) but people are people, and war will go on, making the notion of war itself seem futile.

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